11-13-2011 09:32 PM
11-13-2011 11:43 PM
Dear Daniel, It is really important to take great care with your description. It has so many errors that your poetry is lost. The poems probably have great depth of feeling, but your description must be expressed with no grammatical or syntactic errors in order for you to get your message across. Please write your description again. I like the cover of your book!