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tattoo711
Posts: 2
Registered: ‎01-27-2012

Twitter: Cartoon Character

Hello there.

Lately I have been trying to promote my cartoon character, Gary the Gator. If you ware interested, please follow Gary_Gator on twitter to support me and my childrens' book endeavors. The first book is available for download and the purchase with no revenue for me. My plan is to revamp the artwork in Gary Goes to the Dentist and create a whole series with this cute little alligator.

 http://www.lulu.com/shop/search.ep?type=&keyWords=gary+goes+to+the+dentist&sitesearch=lulu.com&q=&x=...

Any feedback and/or support is greatly appreciated!

-Laura Harris

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Ron Miller
Posts: 1,691
Registered: ‎02-11-2010

Re: Twitter: Cartoon Character

I really love the artwork!

I think you might want to reconsider how you're handling the text, though. It really looks pasted-in and out of place.

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kevinlomas
Posts: 12,609
Registered: ‎02-11-2010

Re: Twitter: Cartoon Character

Yes, it looks just about right for the target audience.

The pictures look like badly aimed photos though, heads missing, things like that.

Do you have the usual Title page and Copright Page? (Such a shame coloured pages are so dear though!) (I am viewing the printed version in case you are wondering).

Page numbers? The target audience are at the age they will be learning how books work, too.

No back cover? Or is that just due to how you have set up the Preview?

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matthewcchiversathotmaildotcodotuk
Posts: 231
Registered: ‎06-25-2010

Re: Twitter: Cartoon Character

Think its just a small preview :smileyhappy:

Love the artwork - I may have to consider putting it on my wishlist for my daughter in August :smileyhappy:


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