04-09-2012 06:03 PM
Hello fellow Lulu's,
I am pleased to introduce my first novel: Destroyed by the War
Destroyed by the War follows the tale of an Irishman and his comrades throughout the Great War. When the war begins in the summer of 1914; Patrick James McClelland manages to convince his entire class to join up with him. When they arrive at the Front they soon realize the cruel reality of battle. Prepare to see the story of the War to end all wars through the eyes of one who can no longer see, and through the words of one who can no longer speak. Experience the Great War through a man who was destroyed by it.
04-09-2012 06:17 PM
04-09-2012 07:22 PM
Sorry about that...Destroyed by the War can be found on Lulu.com under Literature and Fiction
I will be updating the covers soon.
04-09-2012 07:53 PM
Hello. Not a bad cover, but do you have a right to use those images?
Your copyright should not be on the Title Page, it should be on a page of its own.
I am not sure what the Dedication has to do with the Irish people named in the rest of the story, apart from them being in the same war.
Your text is strangely tabbed and the spacing too wide.
Some of the text is blocked out as if the FBI have been at it or something. Is that do do with wartime letter editing? It should say so.
Chapters should start on new pages.
Take a good read of the text on your back cover.