No, you have done the right thing and even in the right place 
A Preview would have been handy.
I suppose anyone can have any name they wish, but a Seraphim is an angel (in old Hebrew) and I think a Maejai is a Buddhist holyman, so you have a couple of oddly mixed things there.
Turning 360 degs brings you back to the same spot, so she has not actually changed direction ... I would say her life goes off at a tangent.
Mist burned Seraphim then? (And it should read Seraphim's).
What is girlxgirl? Does that = many girls?
'Crap' is such an ugly word to use in a description.
Merlin and King Arthur? OK, why not ...
You cover gives the impression Seraphim is Japanese. I did not realise they are a race of magical beings
I don't think a preview would be good enough to give some one an opinion on it. like demos.Yuri can mean many things, it's even a common name.
The first thing people see is the cover, then the description, then they look for a Preview. Those are your 'Adverts', even for something that cheap.
http://connect.lulu.com/t5/Previews/Why-should-I-p
Then again we are not 'people' here, we are also writers and publishers (and artists) who like to offer advice on what you have created. This is a self-publishing site :-)
It is yes, a few pages, often stopping at a place to make people want to read more.
They can be any pages though ...
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