09-20-2011 09:04 PM
Hey guys I finally got it figured out I think been working on trying to figure this site out.
My novel is published it should be available to purchase it is called Room 205: The Evil Within a lot of myself is in it, however the story is a good fictional suspense novel. Please check it out I have discounted it as well and have to formats you can get it in.
The basic story line is the main character has moved from California hurt in his previously relationship he is finding a new look in life. In his new place of residence he learns about a Room 205 and the weird behavior that goes on together with a friend they try to figure out what is happening in the room is it really a haunting or is it in the main characters head, or is it really going on. This novel has a twist to it you will never believe.
I think I am doing this right by posting the spotlight let me know how I do being that I am new thankyou have a good day
Christopher A. Luce
09-22-2011 07:16 AM
Sounds like a very good story!
Your book has a lot of formatting and editing issues, however.
Starting with the easiest: the copyright page should follow the title page (and it should be "all rights" not "alrights").
Don't mix fonts. The sans serif you used for the dedication is really jarring.
And you should justify your text.
Now to the harder stuff. You really, really, really need to have someone objectively edit your book for you. Aside from typos and punctuation (too often the lack of it), there are just far too many sentences that don't work grammatically. A few almost don't make sense.
12-03-2011 11:48 PM