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ZachRichardson
Posts: 3
Registered: ‎02-28-2011

My Debut Novel! Feedback/Reviews MUCH appreciated!

"This book is packed with action, the action is constant and the reader will move from one intense scene to the next... The reader will have fun wading through this book." - Krystal Larson, Live To Read.

Five years ago, master assassin Jin Sakai inadvertantly sacrificed the lives of his wife and children to prevent the world's most powerful clan of assassins from unleashing the Apocalypse. When he learns that it was a sacrifice made in vain, Jin instantly sets out on a violent one-man war to tear the assassins' clan down around their ears. After all, who better to destroy them than the man who brought them together?

Unfortunately, there is far more going on behind the scenes than Jin realizes. Forces are at play that have been manipulating the course of his life ever since he was born. By setting out on his quest for vengeance, Jin unknowingly cements his destiny as one of the key warriors in the apocalyptic war that’s brewing just beneath the surface

Chronicles of the Apocalypse: Revenge, Everything is Nothing is the first in a six part series about a unique group of people who discover they must band together and spearhead humanity's fight to survive when the bloodthirsty legions of Hell are unleashed upon our world.

 

It's been a long time since I've been active here on Lulu, and when I saw that the forums were back (at least in a form I recognized :smileytongue:), I couldn't help but be excited to share my work once again. :smileyhappy: http://www.lulu.com/shop/zach-richardson/chronicles-of-the-apocalypse-revenge-everything-is-nothing/...

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BrittanyAdelle
Posts: 11
Registered: ‎11-07-2011

Re: My Debut Novel! Feedback/Reviews MUCH appreciated!

Wow! I'm already interested simply by reading the first page! That's exceptional, since I hardly get that enthralled with a book at the beginning. Good job!

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Peter May
Posts: 2,275
Registered: ‎02-11-2010

Re: My Debut Novel! Feedback/Reviews MUCH appreciated!

 

Looks good, striking cover, well formatted.

 

I suppose I'd have to buy the book to find out why -- when they found the best assassin in the world - they sent the worst ones after him, and why they weren't armed with a gun. But I suppose if they did have  guns  the book would finish before the end of the first chapter :smileyhappy:

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ZachRichardson
Posts: 3
Registered: ‎02-28-2011

Re: My Debut Novel! Feedback/Reviews MUCH appreciated!

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Lol, very true. Thanks for your feedback. :smileyhappy:

And thank you as well, 

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Ron Miller
Posts: 1,684
Registered: ‎02-11-2010

Re: My Debut Novel! Feedback/Reviews MUCH appreciated!

The book looks very nice! Just two suggestions:

1. You don't need the "By:" on the title page.

2. You really need to work on your cover. The title and author name are completely lost in that sea of solid black.

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matthewcchiversathotmaildotcodotuk
Posts: 230
Registered: ‎06-25-2010

Re: My Debut Novel! Feedback/Reviews MUCH appreciated!

Looks good and reads awesomley :smileyhappy:

I wish the first page of my book sounded more interesting lol :smileyvery-happy: well done :smileyhappy:


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ZachRichardson
Posts: 3
Registered: ‎02-28-2011

Re: My Debut Novel! Feedback/Reviews MUCH appreciated!

Many thanks Matthew, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :smileyhappy:

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