04-06-2012 05:18 PM
I would like to invite you to pick up a copy of my new book and eBook titled: Appled by Maritess Emborgo. It is about the love story of a surgeon and a nurse who met in a medical mission. It is unique and a truly inspiring story. It is a story of how enduring love prevails against all odds. The setting was in the Philippines until they migrated to the United States. It is now available here in Lulu. And will soon be available at amazon.com
I will appreciate reviews. It is partly fiction and partly based on true to life story. Thank you all.
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04-06-2012 08:33 PM
I looked at the Preview of your printed version.
It has a nice looking cover, but flowers, not apples? Apple is a person? Perhaps a person should be on the cover?
I get the title, lets see how many others do.
Book innards look ok (I don't have the time to read it) but there are numbers on pages that should not have numbers. Numbering should start on the page the story starts on and end where the story ends.
04-07-2012 05:48 AM
Nice cover but I don't understand its relevence to the story.
What Kevin said plus
-no blank line between paragraphs
- better a serif font
- use curly apostrophes/quote marks
- new line for dialogue
From reading the book I think perhaps English is not your first language.
work/ed appears 5 times in first 4 lines.
First para is contradictory "He looked for work. . . . he couldn't find work ... . . . he worked as a carpet cleaner." I think what you meant was he couldn't find a hospital job so he worked cleaning carpets.
"Sometimes she wandered if her decisions were right...." Should be wondered.
Equipment is plural
04-07-2012 01:19 PM
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