Hi Everyone! I'm Very Excited! I just published my 2nd children's book, "Moon Girl" on lulu! [ Edited ]

[beboss]

Hi Everyone.  Very excited about finishing my  2nd children's book on Lulu. It's called "Moon Girl". When you have a chance, check out the preview. I also have a trailer.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-UJ2K2CeNP4. Please feel free to leave any comments. I really appreciate any feed back. Thank you so much.

Thanks for some initial comments. Great help from a fab community. My book has been updated.http://www.lulu.com/product/hardcover/moon-girl/18951017

[Peter May]

The link to the book is http://www.lulu.com/product/hardcover/moon-girl/18945643

I love the original drawings.

But I think the book need some editing.

For example, the back covers asks 'Have you ever wondering why the ...' which I think should be 'wondered why'

Apostrophe symbols are sometimes curly/smart but sometimes straight.

[beboss]

Thank you so much Peter. This is exactly why I need feedback.( I've been having seasonal sinus headaches too) I haven't announce my book  to friends and family...thank goodness.

By the way, do you know if there is a way to change the book cover on lulu without having to start the process all over again? I hit the revise button but i there's no way I can do it....am I missing something?

[morelandjoe]

You might want to reread the first sentence on your back cover before you call the job done....just sayin'

[morelandjoe]

Whoops, I didn't notice that someone else already commented on the back cover.  Don't want to pile on.

[RiazAli]

I really like your Youtube promo video. That has inspired me to try and make a video to promote my book. Well done on that.

[degee22]

Hi it is funny that you are talking about editing and other services to polish up your work as I can tell you I have proofed and edited my work over a hundred times But I am writing to tell your about a few sites that can provide these services for  a nominal fee..

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[beboss]

Thanks Riaz. Go for it. Let us know when yours is done!

[kevinlomas]

Those Lulu links do not lead to your book, so I cannot comment!

To change it is > Revise, and towards the top right of the page that opens should be a Create New Revision button. Do note that if you make very very obvious changes >> you will have to start all over with a new ISBN in a new Project and Retire the first one.

[beboss]

Yes, I tried that but it didn't allow me to change the hardcover so I had to start it as a new project.  So now that I retired the old one, and I don't see the Isbn# on my project list, am I still assigned the same one?