04-11-2012 03:43 AM
Have you ever wanted to take a look at early American history in a way not often discussed. My short story "Pigboy Before The Genesis" promises to give you a different look. Take a look at the preview and let me know your feelings on this story. It was really great listening to my great grandmother tell this and other stories growing up in the 1950's in rural Mississippi.
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04-11-2012 06:38 AM - edited 04-11-2012 06:39 AM
Best of luck with the book, Howard, but a couple of things..
Its a good idea to give the link to your book if you want people to comment on the preview -- this is it http://www.lulu.com/shop/howard-rambsy-sr/pigboy-b
As for your book - do you have title/copyright/ISBN pages because none are shown in the preview?
I found the story hard to understand because the language is confusing - e.g the last sentence of the first paragraph, third sentence of the second paragraph...
I won't mention the formatting because you asked only for comments on the story but suggest you redo the back cover to put a description of the story and correct the spelling of 'bricks'.