Early American History

[hrambsy]

Have you ever wanted to take a look at early American history in a way not often discussed.  My short story "Pigboy Before The Genesis" promises to give you a different look. Take a look at the preview and let me know your feelings on this story.  It was really great listening to my great grandmother tell this and other stories growing up in the 1950's in rural Mississippi.   

[Peter May · Accepted solution]

Best of luck with the book, Howard, but a couple of things..

Its a good idea to give the link to your book if you want people to comment on the preview -- this is it http://www.lulu.com/shop/howard-rambsy-sr/pigboy-before-the-genesis/paperback/product-20052472.html and the correct place to post this is in Author Spotlight.

As for your book - do you have title/copyright/ISBN  pages  because none are shown in the preview?

I found the story hard to understand because the language is confusing - e.g the last sentence of the first paragraph, third sentence of the second paragraph...

I won't mention the formatting because you asked only for comments on the story but suggest you  redo the back cover to put a description of the story and correct the spelling of 'bricks'.

[hrambsy]

Thanks very much for your observations.  You made me realize quite a few things and for that I am very

thankful.