Looking for Beta Readers
Thank you for reading! Those kind words would be nice in a review on Goodreads or Amazon. I'm so glad you liked it, and it's only just the beginning as you saw. The first was the hardest and I've learned so much, can't wait to do it all again next year for book two.
The second goes faster and flows more easily. Partly it's the lessons learned from the first. Keep the goal in mind -- the last scene, where everything wraps up.
Keep in mind that you've made us start to care about these characters, so you need to treat them nicely.
You just may want to take a second look at your cover. I am pretty sure that I have never seen a book before with the author's name so large and prominent and the title so small and tucked away.
Black Cat Studios
edited August 28
Decided not to comment, but can't figure how to delete.