I have proof read and made some changes thus, I need Feedback
It was a wonderful day for both Isa and Aisha who came home from School. Isa is a student from Lincoln Knights High and as for Aisha who is a 7th grader who attended Whittier Middle School. Their story began somewhere in Lincoln when they see Aaron, an autistic student from Knights High School.
Aaron was getting beat up by the two popular students, Andrew and Jimmy. Both Isa and Aisha ran up and they started to fight Them. After the bullies gotten beat up, they to run like cowards. Andrew and Jimmy than told Aaron, “we will get you later!” Who are they Isa asked they are bullies who refused to leave me alone. Aisha looked at Aaron said my name is Aisha, and this is Isa, my brother. Than Isa remember that student with Autism. Wait, I know you... Isa asked are you that student That every Teachers, Paras, and students who wants a piece of you Aaron, right? Yes, that is my name, it’s Aaron he said.
do you want to join us? Join? What do you mean? We are going to start a Group... I will be the President of the Group and as for Aisha, she will be the CEO. So, do you still want to Join? Yes, he said. Than Isa replied back we are planning on building a Headquarters in our backyard and we be called the Tumeh Family. why the Tumeh Family? Aaron asked because my sister and I wanted to start up a group that will we are all welcome like a one big family.
Note: this is a PURE FICTION Novel
secondly, I gave the Isa and Aisha my last name, Tumeh
Trina Isa means Jesus in Arabic
like I said before I just proof read and made some changes