When Daisies and Thunderstorms Collide by Isabel Scheck


  • Just KevinJust Kevin Lulu Genius


    The white font is a bit lost on the light blue cover art.

    You need to remove the numbers from the Frontmatter. (The pages at the front that are not the story.)

    There's a scarcity of words per page in my opinion. Unless it's for people with sight problems (as per Large Text books) then the font is too large, too bold, and the words are too spaced.

    I think it's all one story? If so then there are far too many page breaks.

  • MaggieMaggie www.custom-book-tique.com Author
    Kevin, this is not Author Workshop. She is promoting her book.

  • Papi_SoñolientoPapi_Soñoliento Southern Escarpment Hill Country Teacher
  • Just KevinJust Kevin Lulu Genius

    Kevin, this is not Author Workshop. She is promoting her book.

    I am aware of that Maggie, and I was invited to take a look and asked if I enjoyed it. I mentioned what I noticed. What a potential buyer would notice.

    It does not matter if it is poetry. And just to check how a master handled it, I have just looked at The Raven, and although there's a lot of white space at the sides of the text, the font is still quite small and there's a lot of text per page.

    It's just my opinion of course and I would be interested what the OP thinks of it.

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