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LicSLicS https://www.scribd.com/user/346602778/Kurt-Burnum Reader

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  • Skoob_ymSkoob_ym Teacher
    So, Kurt, this is an interesting work, though there may be room for some improvements. Are you interested in some constructive criticism, or are you posting it simply to draw our attention to it?
  • LicSLicS https://www.scribd.com/user/346602778/Kurt-Burnum Reader
    Actually, I'm still trying to to offord help. It's very raw and gritty and help is more appropriate than criticism at this point. Thanks guys.
  • LicSLicS https://www.scribd.com/user/346602778/Kurt-Burnum Reader
    I just would like to share. I hope it might inspire greatness in someone.
  • Sooo? Skoob, any help that's emaginable is welcome at this juncture; can you help? I would really like to sell a novel with positive feedback! 
  • Skoob_ymSkoob_ym Teacher
    There's a lot of material in the bit that I read. I think that if you took a slower pace in the storytelling it would tend to improve the work. But best of luck with it, and I hope it hits a home run for you.
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