What do you think?
I have an idea for a book, and I wrote a little bit for it. Just wondering if it sounds interesting:
The System is our lifeline.
It connects all of us together.
Without it, we would revert to the dark times where blood was shed without a second thought. The System beats like a living thing, and in the center of it all is the Heart. The System is everything to us, but there are some that let their minds wonder.
What if the System didn’t exist?
Would we really go back to how it was?
What would happen if we unplugged the Heart?
These opened minds tested their theory. They unplugged the Heart of the System and the world went dark.
Our world fell into chaos as our lifeline was shut down. Terrified, we shivered in the darkness and begged for the light of our Heart.
When the lights came back on, the minds that tested their theory had disappeared and a new Heart was beating healthier and brighter than before.
This marked the New Age.
The New Age conditioned minds to rely on the Heart, to love the light we have been granted through it. Without these rules, we would lose our very selves.
However, there are still young minds that can be molded. Minds that wonder if the Heart is truly helping us. Minds that need just the tiniest push to set things into motion.
And this push started with one voice.